Thursday, 29 June 2017

New York City Has Fallen

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  1. Stranded, Jim looked around at the city, destroyed and desolate. All around him lay rubble. The sound of silence rang in his ears. Jim felt his heart skip a beat and his hands grow sweaty. At that moment the fear took hold, he was all alone.

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  2. Jim stood in the city scared and lonely. Jim looked around and said
    "Is anybody here?".
    - Ella -

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  3. Jim stood in the city lonely sad
    it was messy very messy in fact the most messy like a Dump!
    it was soundless as soundless as an open wasteland
    jim felt terrible very very scared

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  4. The city stood silent while Jim's heart was pounding. The city was a pigsty. Jim was helpless. He felt petrified because everyone was gone.
    -Sophie-

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  5. Jim stood in the of silence.It was a dump.it was silent.it was scary

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  6. Jim stayed in the middle of the city while it fell done around him. New York turned into a filthy place once the liberty statue had fallen and other buildings fell hard onto the ground. Jim was horrified of everything near him.
    Georgia

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  7. Jim stood in the middle of the city dirty because he had not have a shower in a week.

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  8. Jim stood in the the empty wrecked city.
    The city was wrecked to pieces.
    The city was so silent it felt that there was nothing there.
    Jim felt he was going to faint he was so terrified.

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  9. Jim walked out of the city with the food that he borrowed.The food was delicious and he ate happily in peace in the quietness.Jim felt happy with nobody around him he could get anything new and available.

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  10. Jim stood in new York city it was horrendously messy. It was dead silent and Jim felt lonely and cold, he was alone.
    By Daniel

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  11. Jim stood in the city the statue of Liberty had fallen and all you could see was the spikes.the city was very unstable and messy.it was terribly quit you couldn't even hear the birds chirping. Jim felt very scared and alone.

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  12. Jim stood in the fallen city it was a very messy city it was so quiet
    and silence. Jim was very lonely and scared.

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  13. Jim stood in the shadow of the dead people underneath him.

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